クリムゾンは、トレース！

Well, I've begun to work on a story type thing. Actually, I've just got an idea in my head. Here it is, in a nutshell -

Sixteen year old Miyuki Kazuko is a normal person. He goes to school, he lives in Tokyo. He's popular, and whatnot. He seems happy, right? Wrong. His parents have long yet split up, leaving him dark and emotional on the inside. He doesn't trust too many people. One night, his family is robbed, and he is shot, leaving him dead. He wakes up in a strange trance-like land. He sets out to find out who killed him, and to get back to his world, called the Dermus Land (earth).

Well, it's an idea...feel free to elaborate and throw out ideas. I might make a rp site sometime.

My idea FTW!

Not really. xD You told me that he dies.